Character Finalizations Page 1

Okay, my original plan was to upload a huge massive file with all the character finalizations in it. I had wanted to get that all done before I posted the first page of the actual comic but looking at how I promised to have the first page up by the end of the month and I have a full time job to work around I realized that wasn't going to happen. So instead I just going to gradually post the finalizations page by page.

Obviously this page was more practice than design finalization. Once again I used their NiD costumes because I like them better (not to mention they're simpler and easier to draw... >.> ... What? I'm not lazy...).

Ironically, even though this is is the first page it was drawn second and the second page was drawn first... I sorta drew the second page and then went "Oh snap! I forgot NiGHTS, Reala, and Jackle!" Then I got a serious case of art block that lasted a few months... NiGHTS was the first thing I drew when I got out of that horrid block which may explain why it ended up looking a little off...

Right now I'm serioulsy looking for some feedback! This is my first attempt at making a comic and I want to know how I'm doing, even on designs and technique! I decided markers would be the best medium to use for the comic since coloring with colored pencils takes me longer and my scanner doesn't always agree with the finished project in the end. I know I'm not the best at using markers right now, I've not really had much formal art training. Most of what I've learned I taught myself or have picked up from other people. Feel free to tell me the things you like but at the same time do not be afraid to let me know what could use improvement and, if you know, how to make those improvements.

If you have the time I would really appreciate comments on each individual character. If not, general comments are fine. At this stage, comments are much more valuable to me than faves!